We've listened carefully to the feedback from our teacher and fellow media student and have made plans to address the points they made .
Dan (Media Teacher) - Dan mentions how he thinks the ending is strong but he feels like we should add some sort of editing technique , he also feels like the mirror shots could be played with too
----> Wednesday we plan to meet up and try out different techniques and see which one makes the mirror footage and ending even better.
----> We need to add in more cue cards and a bit of movement , we plan to film that on wednesday too. To achieve this we're going to have Vanessa hold the cue cards and drop them.
Susan (Media student) - She thinks the beginning needs fixing
----> During thursday we will go through from the beginning and really focus on editing it and asking for Susan's opinion again.
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