Evaluation : Feedback from teacher

After completing 3 out of the 4 evaluation questions and saving them as drafts I asked my media teacher Louisa to have a look and inform me on anything that needs improving or adding to each question. She had a look and these are the points she made..


Question 1 :

• Add a real media comparison for your music vide

Question 2 :

• We need to know who your target audience is
• How do we know they are your target audience ?
• Change slide share to something else (For example : photobucket)

Question 4 :

• Make text bigger in the ancillary part
• Add a summary telling us what you have learnt

I noted Louisa's feedback down

I believe feedback is imperative to ensure a strong outcome , for me to achieve a good grade for the evaluation I must take everything on board and improve my work accordingly. I'm in the process of finishing question 3 as a draft and asking my teacher to take a look before I post the finished version. However this might be tricky as the deadline is tomorrow and my teacher might be busy.